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Thursday, May 26, 2005

40 sec. poem

I was joking with a friend, and this came out in less than 40 seconds :D
I dind't correct the spelling mistakes nor the ryhme, as we wrote it :)
I am having really sick jokes today
I called it Burn in Hell


Burn in Hell
I saw one star that night

It was shining, ,It was so bright

I starred with a sigh

And asked for tha boy i left behind

Had he left his arrogant shrine

It looked towards me and said

After all what u did

He felt he is dead

He threw the shrine

And wokred hard to get his pride

Worked and worked days and nights

Until he found his pride and bride

They got married and got a child

He forgot all about ur time

And lived ever happy all the time

And Here u are with misery and sighs

Asking about the boy u left behind

So Live in grief and DIE

I know it is so bad at some places but still, ALL RIGHTS RESERVED :D

10 Comments:

Hi Nader,

what is it with Nader and satan , death and hell LOL...

From one of your older blogs i kinda figured out that ur a religious guy....

BTW, you have an interesting blog...

The Jordanian Bloggers simply


R O C K !!!

Cheers,
Ashwin

By Anonymous Anonymous, at 12:29 PM  

Welcome Ashwin and thank you :D
Well, I'm Livin in hell these days, that's why :D
BTW which post are u referring to ?
And ya, jordanian bloggers are the best :D

By Blogger Nader, at 9:55 PM  

Very nice one :)

By Blogger M!R@CHK@, at 11:19 PM  

Btw y did u name it burn it hell?

By Blogger M!R@CHK@, at 11:54 AM  

Cause the girl deserves it, so let her burn in hell :D

By Blogger Nader, at 2:30 PM  

hahaha this actually isn't too bad!!! when i thought 40 seconds.. i thought 7aykoon eshi silly, but its actually sort of deep :P
not bad for 40 seconds nader, not bad at all... sorta remind me of nirvana's the man who sold the world. maybe you should tla7enha as well :P
bas shu, sheklak suffering inside?

By Blogger Roba, at 12:41 AM  

Wallah ya Roba, suffering inside and
outside, this is a horrible time for me.
Thanx for the NIRVANA comparison,
ra7 adawer 3ala mula7en :D

By Blogger Nader, at 1:46 AM  

Ba3dain shoo 7kayet eshi Silly ya sit Roba, ah, an ya3ni silly bel3adeh :D

By Blogger Nader, at 1:57 AM  

Humble decision!

By Blogger Tutti, at 9:16 PM  

Milla, Thanx, I GUESS :D

By Blogger Nader, at 10:39 AM  

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