40 sec. poem
I was joking with a friend, and this came out in less than 40 seconds :D
I dind't correct the spelling mistakes nor the ryhme, as we wrote it :)
I am having really sick jokes today
I called it
Burn in Hell Burn in Hell
I saw one star that nightIt was shining, ,It was so brightI starred with a sighAnd asked for tha boy i left behindHad he left his arrogant shrineIt looked towards me and saidAfter all what u didHe felt he is deadHe threw the shrineAnd wokred hard to get his prideWorked and worked days and nightsUntil he found his pride and brideThey got married and got a childHe forgot all about ur timeAnd lived ever happy all the timeAnd Here u are with misery and sighsAsking about the boy u left behind So Live in grief and DIE
I know it is so bad at some places but still, ALL RIGHTS RESERVED :D
10 Comments:
Hi Nader,
what is it with Nader and satan , death and hell LOL...
From one of your older blogs i kinda figured out that ur a religious guy....
BTW, you have an interesting blog...
The Jordanian Bloggers simply
R O C K !!!
Cheers,
Ashwin
Welcome Ashwin and thank you :D
Well, I'm Livin in hell these days, that's why :D
BTW which post are u referring to ?
And ya, jordanian bloggers are the best :D
Very nice one :)
Btw y did u name it burn it hell?
Cause the girl deserves it, so let her burn in hell :D
hahaha this actually isn't too bad!!! when i thought 40 seconds.. i thought 7aykoon eshi silly, but its actually sort of deep :P
not bad for 40 seconds nader, not bad at all... sorta remind me of nirvana's the man who sold the world. maybe you should tla7enha as well :P
bas shu, sheklak suffering inside?
Wallah ya Roba, suffering inside and
outside, this is a horrible time for me.
Thanx for the NIRVANA comparison,
ra7 adawer 3ala mula7en :D
Ba3dain shoo 7kayet eshi Silly ya sit Roba, ah, an ya3ni silly bel3adeh :D
Humble decision!
Milla, Thanx, I GUESS :D